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Within the night
Beneath the cold
They knew it would end
As they were told
But they didn't care
They didn't fight
There was safety there
Within the night

Within the night
Beneath the rain
They felt no loneliness
They felt no pain
They could never
Love in the light
So they stayed forever
Where it was right
Within the night

They lived in the night

Within the night
©2006-2009 ~wynterzend
:iconwynterzend:

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A take on Romeo & Juliet that I wrote when I was about their age.

Hear this one on MySpace.
[link]

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:iconcorpse-warrior:
Beautifully written

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doommetal-club [link]
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ImpureDirge Spirituality Club [link]
A life not even lived becomes a ceaseless wake
:iconwynterzend:
Thank you. *smiles*

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I'm not evil. I'm just misunderstood.
That being said, if you like my lyrics, listen to the songs at [link]
:iconcorpse-warrior:
You are welcome :)

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doommetal-club [link]
Monolith Verses [link]
ImpureDirge Spirituality Club [link]
A life not even lived becomes a ceaseless wake
:iconrainbows-die-to-fast:
makes me feel cold and i imagine a clear sky with lots of stars....
:iconwynterzend:
Awesome. That's pretty much what I was going for and what I imagine too, even with the rain part, oddly enough. =-)

--
I'm not evil. I'm just misunderstood.
That being said, if you like my lyrics, listen to the songs at [link]
:icontwistednibbles67:
Wow the way it was written and the language that was used was lovely, yet left the reader with the reality of a tragic romance. Beautiful, as always!! Hehe... ok I have to go or the gnomes shall come.

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~Light, like the flutter of wings, feel your hollow voice rushing into me~
:iconwynterzend:
lol, thank you.

--
I'm not evil. I'm just misunderstood.
That being said, if you like my lyrics, listen to the songs at [link]
And if you like it and have a MySpace, please add me. *winks*
:iconwynterzend:
Thank you

--
I'm not evil. I'm just misunderstood.
That being said, if you like my lyrics, listen to the songs at [link]
And if you like it and have a MySpace, please add me. *winks*

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